Review Detail of Nah_U_Stupid in Advent of Chaos
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What is wrong with these 5-star spammers? The grammar and writing of this FanFic is below average, albeit still ok if you use WN standards. The cringeness of the MC's personality and the fact that the author tries so hard to make the MC look "cool". I might be harsh but this is just bad imo. Maybe some people like it because they simp for Harems🤣🤣
Advent of Chaos
Pure_R18_Terror
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You might not know it yourself, but how you write your FanFic is a testament to what I am trying to say. There are lots of moments in your FanFic where the writing feels not "natural" and just cringe/funny when it tries to show the unstable personality of the MC is early chaps.
Pure_R18_Terror:while the other things you wrote I don't have anything against but I have not once tried to make him look 'cool' and that's the honest truth wether you believe me or not is up to you.
Nah_U_Stupid:You might not know it yourself, but how you write your FanFic is a testament to what I am trying to say. There are lots of moments in your FanFic where the writing feels not "natural" and just cringe/funny when it tries to show the unstable personality of the MC is early chaps.
Thank god we have someone sane around here. Lets be honest the max stars a ff on this site can get is 3 stars and thats being generous. There are very very few good ff on this site and almost all of them dont have harem. I dont know why all these harem ff are getting such high ratings when they are written by a lonely degenerate otaku. Most harems are trash for a reason. The relationships are forced, they make it a pokemon collector, so many females with no personality, and most of the time its just some virgin kid writing out his sick fantasies without making a real story.