Review Detail of XXXXC in My Blessed Psychic System

Alright so I only read the first few chaps and I must say that the idea is intriguing. After fleshing out some more, this can get really good and even popular. As for the critique, (I will not comment on the characters as I already stated the reason above. ) the writing quality is good but the author should proofread once and edit it out. (like in chap 3 there is a quotation mistake.) The concept is interesting but I feel like it's more telling than showing. (But it's alright. This is something that one gets their hands on only after a lot of practice.) Overall, this was a good read. And as I said before, it has a lot of potential. Good luck author.