Here is honest thought, the concept itself very interesting and is not like other systems novels with the interesting lore behind it especially with psychic power behinds it. However, it needs more description rather than telling, I suggest you give more details about the Infinite Rep Academy and the character's whereabouts. As for the MC, Isaiah, so far he is fine as Mc, but I suggest giving more exploration about his personality and his relationship with his parents or. So far, I don't get the full detail of it since the beginning is already like a turning point of his revelation. Overall, this novel might have awesome potential, and thank you. Keep up the good work.
A_lucid_Dreamer
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