Review Detail of Nicole_And_Crystal in Not Your Ordinary Boy

The story isn't great but isn't bad it's around the middle the author is still in a young age so I don't blame him, I don't think that the title got to do with any part of the story, no offence this are my honest opinions, I don't want to be a spoiler so I won't talk about what is in the story, don't let bad comments discourage you I know this is kinda a bad comment but at least I'm honest, right? keep on practicing and you'll get better in no time, I hope you continue doing what your heart desires