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Minatoq
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Double standard is pissing me off. Women who slept with ML are treated like slut and trash while everyone are supposed to be fine and dandy with Damon's or any other male alpha's whorish past because he got "enlightened" due to mate bond. Women are made into villains because they want to be with young rich powerful handsome men unless they are "destined" for alpha, of course the best if she is "pure" virgin. Old patriarchal bullshit where men "need to" sleep around while women are supposed to wait for future husband. It's overused and cliche where "pure" FL fixes bad boy. This novel definitely doesn't bring anything new to the table. It's dumb entertainment and wish-fulfillment where bad promiscuous man fall in love with woman and suddenly changes into perfect husband which is laughingly naive. Females are also weak-willed and without self-respect who let men get away scot-free after any bullshit they do. Also Talia who went from poor bullied woman turned herself into bully who step on any woman who slept with Damon even though it was Damon's mistake to be promiscuous. If FL and ML or their friends are doing something it's fine but when someone doesn't suck up to them and do the same then they are "evil".

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Minatoq
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I don't see the reason why I shouldn't criticize women being dehumanized by alphas unless they are women they care about because the world is patriarchal. Talia is also female alpha and Damon defended her when someone tried to put her down. So is the world patriarchal and women are supposed to shut up or they should be strong and independent? And if werewolves are licentious then why Damon is angry at even thought that Talia could be with other men before him? Rules for thee but not for me? The funny thing is that Saba and Leslie also gave Damon shit for not keeping in his pants. George also said that behavior like Damon's is the reason why self-respecting women don't get involved with alphas when he treated Talia like shit again. There are also alphas who aren't complete douches like Axel or George so apparently not all alphas are idiots who can only think with what is between their legs like Damon or Maddox. I don't want to see their suffering because Damon "saw the light" but because he still hasn't changed his mindset. While he talks how his previous behavior was wrong he still thinks that he "had needs" or him humiliating Talia was just "dominance play". Damon always gets forgiven without really working for forgiveness. And it shows with him not changing his behavior because there was immediately incident with Jade after pack run. Who got painted as horrible bitch for wanting to become Damon's Luna as if it was horrible crime when it was Damon's fault for ignoring her instead of resolving this matter by calling Jade and explaining to her he found his mate. Him seeing someone ha cares about being treated like alphas treat non-mate females would fix his misogynistic mindset.

RedSonia:This is a fiction/fantasy story about werewolves who are licentious and patriarchal. Males and females are NOT equals. Hint: there is only one pack with two Alphas; in all other packs, the male is the Alpha, while his Luna is mostly for decoration (and producing an heir). The first few chapters should tip you off about the world of this story, and I have no idea why you are trying to put characters in a mold of morality that applies to humans. I crafted this storyline while painting a picture of Damon's and Talia's journey, and their changes to become better people. Better, in their world where the strongest rules (not better by human standards). Instead of celebrating Damon for seeing the light, you want him (and his daughter) to suffer. That's disturbing TBH. It seems you have lots of ideas about how to improve the storyline, so maybe you should write a story of your own. That's how I started. Cheers!
RedSonia
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I'm glad you were able to get that off your chest. 😅

RedSonia
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This is a fiction/fantasy story about werewolves who are licentious and patriarchal. Males and females are NOT equals. Hint: there is only one pack with two Alphas; in all other packs, the male is the Alpha, while his Luna is mostly for decoration (and producing an heir). The first few chapters should tip you off about the world of this story, and I have no idea why you are trying to put characters in a mold of morality that applies to humans. I crafted this storyline while painting a picture of Damon's and Talia's journey, and their changes to become better people. Better, in their world where the strongest rules (not better by human standards). Instead of celebrating Damon for seeing the light, you want him (and his daughter) to suffer. That's disturbing TBH. It seems you have lots of ideas about how to improve the storyline, so maybe you should write a story of your own. That's how I started. Cheers!

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RedSonia
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I would suggest you direct your anger on something that's not a fantasy novel about werewolves. A one-star review was enough to say you don't like it. I must note that you gave a 5-star review to a novel that starts with ML ra*ing the FL, but that's fine because ML toned down the abuse later. Talk about double standards. Reminder: Damon never forced himself on a woman.

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Minatoq
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Looking around my account to attack me personally and removing my review shows that you have no response to my argument . The difference between Si Yehan and Damon is that Si Yehan sincerely regrets his actions unlike Damon who thinks "Well maybe I shouldn't have done this but I had NEEDS and it's just dominance play so no biggie also it's past". Besides Damon recording his se*ual acts with women to use it for revenge p*rn and humiliating women publicly and treating them like objects for years isn't any better. Also Si Yehan's behavior is strongly condemned instead of pushing the blame on others. Damon's exes are treated horribly because they have past with him and wanted to be with him while he says sorry and everything's immediately forgiven.

RedSonia:I would suggest you direct your anger on something that's not a fantasy novel about werewolves. A one-star review was enough to say you don't like it. I must note that you gave a 5-star review to a novel that starts with ML ra*ing the FL, but that's fine because ML toned down the abuse later. Talk about double standards. Reminder: Damon never forced himself on a woman.
RedSonia
RedSoniaAuthorRedSonia

I didn't remove your review. Look into WN censorship to educate yourself instead of attacking me. Of course I looked at your account. It's public. And it also shows it's created today, sooo... you must be a super fast reader. 😅

Minatoq:Looking around my account to attack me personally and removing my review shows that you have no response to my argument . The difference between Si Yehan and Damon is that Si Yehan sincerely regrets his actions unlike Damon who thinks "Well maybe I shouldn't have done this but I had NEEDS and it's just dominance play so no biggie also it's past". Besides Damon recording his se*ual acts with women to use it for revenge p*rn and humiliating women publicly and treating them like objects for years isn't any better. Also Si Yehan's behavior is strongly condemned instead of pushing the blame on others. Damon's exes are treated horribly because they have past with him and wanted to be with him while he says sorry and everything's immediately forgiven.