Review Detail of stay_at_home_pig in Bleach! The world of Fang and blade!

Item: Bleach! The world of Fang and blade!
Rating: 4

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stay_at_home_pigLv21yrstay_at_home_pig

i dont really like the mc as of yet but i understand that that is probably since he doesnt have proper character devlepment yet. FMCS also seemed rush and idrl pokemon harems. Writing is decent, updating seems decent, story development is good, his system is op and i m hyped for the future. 1 plot hole i would say is, he is supposed to get 200 EXP everytime he rests up, but after 8 months, which should be 8 X 30 X 200 48,000 EXP and all the other quests he should be getting, do well in class, beat this person etc, he shld be strongest than 5th seat, maybe 1st. Other than that its a good story, just waiting for to be developed. Also excited to see what Aizen has to say

Bleach! The world of Fang and blade!

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Lavalord115AuthorLavalord115

Thank you for the review. Also to explain the system well-related setting. I did take this into account for the 8-month skip, however, he is still in training and is unable to always get enough sleep to be well rested as other factors come into play. More details will be given in later chapters.

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