The Author narrative is distracting(cutting off the story in awkward spots) BUT if that is removed, the story is well written. I like the twist on power.
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LIKEAniki1:Thanks for your reply. I am a rather anti-social person in real life and act plastic (Unlike the real me) so I tend to show more of m thoughts, but I can put them at the end if it disrupts the story.