Review Detail of UnknownFate25 in [ONLY ON WATTPAD] The Mob Character Shouldn’t Have a Yandere Harem?!
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Hello, Author here. Of course I give this five stars, I’m biased. However, After 124 chapters and finishing the first Volume of this book, I think I have a pretty good grasp on this story. If you’re not sure on whether you want to read this book, then here you go- the opinion straight from the Author himself. Get ready to read a lot though, I might accidentally rant 😅 1 - This story is a Fantasy, Action, and Comedy. This means that unlike some other yandere works, it’s not super psychological. There will be yandere moments and character development, but it’s not as psychologically deep. 2 - The MC. If you read the other reviews, you might notice that most of the bad ones have to do with the MC. Except for one review which gives one star, just says “not my cup of tea” and doesn’t explain, like seriously? Anyways, those reviews say that mc is a “beta” and “worst kind of MC” and etc. I just want to say, at the beginning the MC is annoying. That’s true. But that’s on purpose. He’s purposely written that way for his character development. And trust me, at the end of Volume 1, he is a lot different than at the beginning. So if you are reading and the only thing you dislike is the MC, then please continue on. He gets better, I promise. I will admit though his character development does take some time. 3 - A flaw in this story, at least the first Volume, is not all harem characters get appropriate development, due to me focusing on advancing the main story. Volume 2 will focus more on character development on harem members and giving them more “screen-time” so that hopefully you can grow to love them. 4 - There might be (probably are) some grammatical errors, feel free to point them out if you wish. I try to fix them when pointed out. 5 - And I’m the author so keep in mind I am biased :). Anyways, should you have read all of this and decided to read, then thank you. If you decided not to read, okay then.
[ONLY ON WATTPAD] The Mob Character Shouldn’t Have a Yandere Harem?!
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1 - He does get the harem. At the beginning he seems to be succeeding, but you’ll see it will start falling apart quickly. 2 - He will step into the spotlight. His whole hating of the spotlight is part of his character development and slowly throughout he’ll start moving more and more into the “spotlight” and start caring about that less and less. Hope that helped, and hope you enjoy the story!
God_Of_Yandere:Yo! im on chapter 15 as of writing this, but I have 2 questions, 1.Does our mc get the harem or does Eric get them?(You might hate me but I like harem) 2.Does He get in the spotlight or stay in the shadows?
That helped, thank you, But the falling apart one, do they leave him or just start murdering eachother
UnknownFate25:1 - He does get the harem. At the beginning he seems to be succeeding, but you’ll see it will start falling apart quickly. 2 - He will step into the spotlight. His whole hating of the spotlight is part of his character development and slowly throughout he’ll start moving more and more into the “spotlight” and start caring about that less and less. Hope that helped, and hope you enjoy the story!
God_Of_Yandere:That helped, thank you, But the falling apart one, do they leave him or just start murdering eachother
God_Of_Yandere:Yo! im on chapter 15 as of writing this, but I have 2 questions, 1.Does our mc get the harem or does Eric get them?(You might hate me but I like harem) 2.Does He get in the spotlight or stay in the shadows?
God_Of_Yandere:Currently on chapter 55, Love it haha, This is the first time ive commented lol
Lolicon240:I'm loving the book author so just jeep up the great work!!
Loved the volume 1 and can't wait for volume 2 and many more volumes to come! Keep up the work. I have read all your works Monster Harem, My School Idol - I especially love Yandere harem genre and you are really good at it. Can you suggest some other works where I can find Yandere Harem, its really difficult to find one.
The only one I can think of is “What Do You Mean My Cute Disciples Are Yanderes?” by Draekai. It’s here on Webnovel, 700+ chapters, and helped inspire me. Though you’ve may of heard of it already
Bor_Lama:Loved the volume 1 and can't wait for volume 2 and many more volumes to come! Keep up the work. I have read all your works Monster Harem, My School Idol - I especially love Yandere harem genre and you are really good at it. Can you suggest some other works where I can find Yandere Harem, its really difficult to find one.
like with Ken or Eric? or is it just everyone chooses a different partner and ken gets some and Eric gets some?
UnknownFate25:More like everybody starts to fall in love…
Jackson_Alucard611:like with Ken or Eric? or is it just everyone chooses a different partner and ken gets some and Eric gets some?
UnknownFate25:1 - He does get the harem. At the beginning he seems to be succeeding, but you’ll see it will start falling apart quickly. 2 - He will step into the spotlight. His whole hating of the spotlight is part of his character development and slowly throughout he’ll start moving more and more into the “spotlight” and start caring about that less and less. Hope that helped, and hope you enjoy the story!
There are some, and they are in my MOB [Extras] book, denoted with a .5 at the end. As of now, there are four NSFW chapters
Jackson_Alucard611:NSFW?
UnknownFate25:There are some, and they are in my MOB [Extras] book, denoted with a .5 at the end. As of now, there are four NSFW chapters
