Review Detail of Maeve_Kelly_0107 in Planned Baby

i loved the story overall. the characters and plot development fit nicely within the genre. my only concern is misuse of articles, syntax, and pronouns. oh deary. I was rewriting sentences in my mind, thinking this author needs a copy editor. or a subscription to Grammarly. I know English as a native writer and speaker can be difficult. Anyone writing in English, as a non-english speaker can find these three areas challenging. Grammarly or a decent copy editor can fix that issue. it's what publishing houses use for their authors. the modern way, get Grammarly. you won't regret it.