Review Detail of Esemaste_Li in [PREVIEW] The Zaibatsu 5: Volume One
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Cool story, but I don't really like how the author formats the pages. They are often jarring to read through, and some are downright hard to deal with due to the text being manipulated. The story gets ok updates every week or so, but in my humble opinion, the pacing is worked around way too fast, and there is little to no development of the world, settings, or characters. There are some grammar mistakes that sometimes break up the flow of reading too. Generally would not recommend to a new reader :(.[img=faceslap]
[PREVIEW] The Zaibatsu 5: Volume One
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Well, they're not bloated. When I tell someone about my story, these people are people that haven't even heard of my existance before. Not only that, a lot of formatting issues are present because webnovel does not allow certain functions at all. If you want to read an actual version of the story that doesn't have all of these weird glitchy webnovel format problems, then just wait. Webnovel is not the prime thing I publish these things for. I usually do it on Discord instead. Webnovel is basically just spreading the word about it's existance.
Esemaste_Li:I believe a lot of these reviews are bloated, and do not give reason to why they rate the story so highly. There are little to no supporting details in their reviews, and are often short. The only thing they do is preach the success of the novel itself. I think perhaps the writer is having friends or family members artificially boost the ratings of the page. Underhanded behaviour to say the least :( I, on the other hand, am objectively rating the story as it progresses. I do not trust the other reviewers to give accurate reviews as of now.
I believe a lot of these reviews are bloated, and do not give reason to why they rate the story so highly. There are little to no supporting details in their reviews, and are often short. The only thing they do is preach the success of the novel itself. I think perhaps the writer is having friends or family members artificially boost the ratings of the page. Underhanded behaviour to say the least :( I, on the other hand, am objectively rating the story as it progresses. I do not trust the other reviewers to give accurate reviews as of now.
Webnovel formatting issues. Again. I post about 2-3 times a day. Not once a week. In fact, all of three of these chapters have been posted in the same 6 day period. Don't make wrongful assumptions about "being bloated" and other stuff. Because it makes you look stupid to people that love The Zaibatsu 5. Now, this isn't a personal attack. But it is just me throwing facts at you to realize your claims are wrong.