Review Detail of derp1 in In the Harry Potter Without Harry Potter

Surprisingly good. Contrary to the usual walk in the park, well- worn path that most fics take of going through Hogwarts , this novel flips the setting on its head, making it seem grimdark and depressing, while putting your favourite characters in it. Rather than make it depressing, this grimdark nature makes the novel more tense, as there seems to be real struggle and challenge, while the author also knows when to control himself and lets the protagonist gradually turn the situation around. Beyond that , characters are developed, action intense, and storyline logic al