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the idea of ​​the story is not bad just that the beginning is a bit classic, mc is flat and there is hardly any conversion, mc is constantly being bullied by his sister, I don't know how the author intended that the protagonist is lazy but I say that he is only passive and there is a difference between lazy and passive, the story is at the beginning and can still be developed even if for the moment there has been almost no development, the author he wants to do a crossover but for the moment I have not seen anything (I don't know why he put crossover if the god said to go to only one world) I hope that the author undertakes to improve because the story as it is now is not that great

Sloth System [Dropped]

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