Review Detail of Mephesto in Hero of Darkness

Item: Hero of Darkness
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

MephestoLv11yrMephesto

A promising story and overall decent writing. Sadly, the author is dead set on breaking the fourth wall and naming random character with anime and pop culture reference. I understand a reincarnator making reference, but naming your characters Malfoy or Tyrwin Lanester(whatever) is lame and derivative. Take it or leave it. I left...

Hero of Darkness

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BingussLv1Binguss

or continue he will drop those around 250chpt

1yr

Zane_TamLv4Zane_Tam

You told me that he will drop those around chapter 250 well he isn't. Really commanders Stark and Mormont i can ignore but Mordor really. He keeps breaking my immersion.

Binguss:or continue he will drop those around 250chpt

1yr

BingussLv1Binguss

oh thats true the obvious references will be gone by that but he will continue to borrow names from different stories and mythologies

1yr