Review Detail of DaoistwMyHV8 in I Became a System

Item: I Became a System
Rating: 4.6

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DaoistwMyHV8Lv12yrDaoistwMyHV8

the world was slowly introduced so there's no problem with it. the concept was unique, however, it was cliche at first but when I read it it was something uncommon and well planned. the author really keep up and I liked it how he decided to make the chapter longer

I Became a System

yohananmikhael

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DaoistwMyHV8Lv1DaoistwMyHV8

so there's still a room for improvement

NotOnTheApp:Why Not 5 Stars

2yr

NotOnTheAppLv3NotOnTheApp

Why Not 5 Stars

2yr

NotOnTheAppLv3NotOnTheApp

Like The Host?

DaoistwMyHV8:so there's still a room for improvement

2yr

DaoistwMyHV8Lv1DaoistwMyHV8

perhaps? tho what i mean is for improvement of the book. but it can connect there, like the host

NotOnTheApp:Like The Host?

2yr