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GabirUwU
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The story is great, i want to know what will happen on the inheritance and all the writing quality improved a lot from the first chapter to the second and third, maybe it was kinda hard to write how he died and who he wants revenge of more then 110 years of life in one chapter but it wasn't bad, i just felt that it was a bit rushed. the second and third chapters are way better and i hope the quality doesn't drop. The story is interesting and quite fast paced, the MC doesn't have many grudges nor eniminity (at least on the beginning) there aren't any cliches The only thing i felt a little bit confusing is about the cultivation method. what are the differences between a human core and a beast core. and if someone is able to implant a beast core with high affinity, will it b possible to use someone else's core like your brother core ? it will probably have much more affinity with your body as both are brothers and humans... Hope u post more chapters frequently, the 5 days/1 week chapter is good but i wish to read more.

Advent of The Violet Soul

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You are actually right. I have never written any other novel or book and the idea to do a quick review of his previous life was crazy 😄 But i think that i did aT least a decent job heh. Starting form the second chapter i promise that the quality will get a huge boost and if you have any ideas about the story or other things just write it on the comments as you already did. thanks for the review. About the idea of implanting human cores it is possible but the person would die or become a cripple or if someone have a lot of cores they would just lose it. As for the cultivation and stuff, im planning to do a chapter 0 that will explain how it works and how the comprehension level works as well. Hope you continue reading 😁