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CrookedFish
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I should say I stopped reading around chapter 100. The idea is really cool and I loved the first 50-60 chapters but it fell of from there. Similar to many other books with a non humanoid MC it dosent stay that way for long. He gets a human body and all of a sudden its like every other cultivation book on this app. It feels like he is limiting himself greatly because he wants to be a human and have a human body. He could "sleep" anywhere he wants for a few hundred years and have enough energy to buy whatever he wants but he wants to cultivate slowly for some reason and then is mad/upset when he isnt stronger.

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Reincarnated as an Energy with a System

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batuhan
batuhanLv1batuhan

I think you mentioned a great point. What makes this story special in genre is gone. I was expecting some transhumanism path of cultivation, instead it developed into "just a boy with a cheat" story.

shillbear
shillbearLv4shillbear

and here i had hope for somthing cool

Deus_Lobo
Deus_LoboLv4Deus_Lobo

GreatLeecher
GreatLeecherLv4GreatLeecher

Thanks for the review. It made me decide not to start reading it and get frustrated later on.

CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv1CriticalReader

The human path is used because author wants to self insert... after reading hundreds of webnovels, published novels and even fanfiction... i no longer hold any expectations

skyngylon
skyngylonLv3skyngylon

Oh, I should have read the reviews first before reading, I now wasted my 5 hours in this novel. The ignorant and naiveness of the MC is too much, even a simple knowledge that everyone have in his previous world he does not even know it. He does not use much common sense in using the system. He wants to get the below average body of his in the early stages of the story even though this world is a world where strength rules the weak. Instead of getting his previous body he should just create a child instead, it cost cheaper and it can cover up his ignorants and naives, even the strongest cultivators would vomit blood be because the ignorant of the MC is too much. The MC is a bit racist. The story lost its a actual plot of, the MC focus on having a human body instead of getting alot of energy first and start at that time to get a body, he does not even prepare himself for future scenarios. He is not using his system in a proper way, He should buy knowlede about cultivation, the world, and all basic cultures and such at the start but instead actually got the nerve to buy his useless body in the early stages of the story. He is like one of those MCs that treat everything as a joke and he is like a child having a cheat

nivesh_mahajan
nivesh_mahajanLv3nivesh_mahajan

i think it's more appropriate to call him a masochist with a cheat

skyngylon:Oh, I should have read the reviews first before reading, I now wasted my 5 hours in this novel. The ignorant and naiveness of the MC is too much, even a simple knowledge that everyone have in his previous world he does not even know it. He does not use much common sense in using the system. He wants to get the below average body of his in the early stages of the story even though this world is a world where strength rules the weak. Instead of getting his previous body he should just create a child instead, it cost cheaper and it can cover up his ignorants and naives, even the strongest cultivators would vomit blood be because the ignorant of the MC is too much. The MC is a bit racist. The story lost its a actual plot of, the MC focus on having a human body instead of getting alot of energy first and start at that time to get a body, he does not even prepare himself for future scenarios. He is not using his system in a proper way, He should buy knowlede about cultivation, the world, and all basic cultures and such at the start but instead actually got the nerve to buy his useless body in the early stages of the story. He is like one of those MCs that treat everything as a joke and he is like a child having a cheat
DaoistdXml8z
DaoistdXml8zLv2DaoistdXml8z

Vc tá certo, mais vc já tentou ver pela perspectiva de uma pessoa que sabe que vai viver para sempre?,pq esse sua opinião pegar um ponto de vista muito efêmero,pq ele vai ter todo o tempo do mundo (e muito mais)para fazer tudo, agora imagina ele fazer tudo da forma mais eficiente e esquece de viver como ele que, claro nós primeiros mês/anos/séculos e milênios talvez fosse interessante mais e depois?vc vai ter feito tudo que vc tinha que fazer e vc ainda vai ter que esperar mais um ou dois milênios para poder coleta 10% da energia do mundo, vamos concordar que vc passou mil anos faz as coisas devagar mais constantemente e fazendo coisas que vc que fazer (msm que não seja a escolha mais eficiente) seria mais divertido e vc aproveitaria mais,pq aí depois de vc ver que não tem mais nada no mundo aí vc poder taca o foda-se e só coleta energia

skyngylon:Oh, I should have read the reviews first before reading, I now wasted my 5 hours in this novel. The ignorant and naiveness of the MC is too much, even a simple knowledge that everyone have in his previous world he does not even know it. He does not use much common sense in using the system. He wants to get the below average body of his in the early stages of the story even though this world is a world where strength rules the weak. Instead of getting his previous body he should just create a child instead, it cost cheaper and it can cover up his ignorants and naives, even the strongest cultivators would vomit blood be because the ignorant of the MC is too much. The MC is a bit racist. The story lost its a actual plot of, the MC focus on having a human body instead of getting alot of energy first and start at that time to get a body, he does not even prepare himself for future scenarios. He is not using his system in a proper way, He should buy knowlede about cultivation, the world, and all basic cultures and such at the start but instead actually got the nerve to buy his useless body in the early stages of the story. He is like one of those MCs that treat everything as a joke and he is like a child having a cheat
Heyun
HeyunLv4Heyun

Yeah, I hate how all MCs are braindead for the sake of putting them into trouble, is fine if you want to make your character struggle as an author, just don't make him have the potential to be the top existence from the get go, and have them struggle. If you give the MC the power, then you better have him use it and use it well, and not make him be extremely inefficient on the way he uses his power just to balance him up.-

shillbear
shillbearLv4shillbear

tree of aeon a tree all the way

CriticalReader:The human path is used because author wants to self insert... after reading hundreds of webnovels, published novels and even fanfiction... i no longer hold any expectations
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Ethan_Hall_0254
Ethan_Hall_0254Lv1Ethan_Hall_0254

Don’t worry, it changes. If you read a bit further you’ll see it’s definitely not a regular cultivation novel. He uses his energy aspect to switch human bodies and turn into inanimate objects when his body is to soft. He also isn’t about cultivation, he just starts off in a cultivation world.

batuhan:I think you mentioned a great point. What makes this story special in genre is gone. I was expecting some transhumanism path of cultivation, instead it developed into "just a boy with a cheat" story.
Ethan_Hall_0254
Ethan_Hall_0254Lv1Ethan_Hall_0254

Just read a bit further, the book stops being about cultivation and he starts leaning into the energy side more.

GreatLeecher:Thanks for the review. It made me decide not to start reading it and get frustrated later on.
Ethan_Hall_0254
Ethan_Hall_0254Lv1Ethan_Hall_0254

Don’t worry it’s not balanced. He quickly become super strong and the book or more about what he does when he’s strong.

Heyun:Yeah, I hate how all MCs are braindead for the sake of putting them into trouble, is fine if you want to make your character struggle as an author, just don't make him have the potential to be the top existence from the get go, and have them struggle. If you give the MC the power, then you better have him use it and use it well, and not make him be extremely inefficient on the way he uses his power just to balance him up.-
Ethan_Hall_0254
Ethan_Hall_0254Lv1Ethan_Hall_0254

He treats everything as a joke because he is aware that he could be op but there is no reason to rush because he will like forever.

skyngylon:Oh, I should have read the reviews first before reading, I now wasted my 5 hours in this novel. The ignorant and naiveness of the MC is too much, even a simple knowledge that everyone have in his previous world he does not even know it. He does not use much common sense in using the system. He wants to get the below average body of his in the early stages of the story even though this world is a world where strength rules the weak. Instead of getting his previous body he should just create a child instead, it cost cheaper and it can cover up his ignorants and naives, even the strongest cultivators would vomit blood be because the ignorant of the MC is too much. The MC is a bit racist. The story lost its a actual plot of, the MC focus on having a human body instead of getting alot of energy first and start at that time to get a body, he does not even prepare himself for future scenarios. He is not using his system in a proper way, He should buy knowlede about cultivation, the world, and all basic cultures and such at the start but instead actually got the nerve to buy his useless body in the early stages of the story. He is like one of those MCs that treat everything as a joke and he is like a child having a cheat
King_Jake122
King_Jake122Lv1King_Jake122

i just dont understand why make a story with this o.p system and make the mc one of the biggest idiots ive ever read. his stupidity is up there with the mobs in other cultivation novels