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CrookedFish
CrookedFishLv112yrCrookedFish

I should say I stopped reading around chapter 100. The idea is really cool and I loved the first 50-60 chapters but it fell of from there. Similar to many other books with a non humanoid MC it dosent stay that way for long. He gets a human body and all of a sudden its like every other cultivation book on this app. It feels like he is limiting himself greatly because he wants to be a human and have a human body. He could "sleep" anywhere he wants for a few hundred years and have enough energy to buy whatever he wants but he wants to cultivate slowly for some reason and then is mad/upset when he isnt stronger.

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Reincarnated as an Energy with a System

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batuhan
batuhanLv1batuhan

I think you mentioned a great point. What makes this story special in genre is gone. I was expecting some transhumanism path of cultivation, instead it developed into "just a boy with a cheat" story.

shillbear
shillbearLv14shillbear

and here i had hope for somthing cool

Deus_Lobo
Deus_LoboLv4Deus_Lobo

GreatLeecher
GreatLeecherLv5GreatLeecher

Thanks for the review. It made me decide not to start reading it and get frustrated later on.

CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2CriticalReader

The human path is used because author wants to self insert... after reading hundreds of webnovels, published novels and even fanfiction... i no longer hold any expectations

HumbleScholarSu
HumbleScholarSuLv12HumbleScholarSu

Oh, I should have read the reviews first before reading, I now wasted my 5 hours in this novel. The ignorant and naiveness of the MC is too much, even a simple knowledge that everyone have in his previous world he does not even know it. He does not use much common sense in using the system. He wants to get the below average body of his in the early stages of the story even though this world is a world where strength rules the weak. Instead of getting his previous body he should just create a child instead, it cost cheaper and it can cover up his ignorants and naives, even the strongest cultivators would vomit blood be because the ignorant of the MC is too much. The MC is a bit racist. The story lost its a actual plot of, the MC focus on having a human body instead of getting alot of energy first and start at that time to get a body, he does not even prepare himself for future scenarios. He is not using his system in a proper way, He should buy knowlede about cultivation, the world, and all basic cultures and such at the start but instead actually got the nerve to buy his useless body in the early stages of the story. He is like one of those MCs that treat everything as a joke and he is like a child having a cheat

nivesh_mahajan
nivesh_mahajanLv3nivesh_mahajan

i think it's more appropriate to call him a masochist with a cheat

HumbleScholarSu:Oh, I should have read the reviews first before reading, I now wasted my 5 hours in this novel. The ignorant and naiveness of the MC is too much, even a simple knowledge that everyone have in his previous world he does not even know it. He does not use much common sense in using the system. He wants to get the below average body of his in the early stages of the story even though this world is a world where strength rules the weak. Instead of getting his previous body he should just create a child instead, it cost cheaper and it can cover up his ignorants and naives, even the strongest cultivators would vomit blood be because the ignorant of the MC is too much. The MC is a bit racist. The story lost its a actual plot of, the MC focus on having a human body instead of getting alot of energy first and start at that time to get a body, he does not even prepare himself for future scenarios. He is not using his system in a proper way, He should buy knowlede about cultivation, the world, and all basic cultures and such at the start but instead actually got the nerve to buy his useless body in the early stages of the story. He is like one of those MCs that treat everything as a joke and he is like a child having a cheat
DaoistdXml8z
DaoistdXml8zLv2DaoistdXml8z

Vc tá certo, mais vc já tentou ver pela perspectiva de uma pessoa que sabe que vai viver para sempre?,pq esse sua opinião pegar um ponto de vista muito efêmero,pq ele vai ter todo o tempo do mundo (e muito mais)para fazer tudo, agora imagina ele fazer tudo da forma mais eficiente e esquece de viver como ele que, claro nós primeiros mês/anos/séculos e milênios talvez fosse interessante mais e depois?vc vai ter feito tudo que vc tinha que fazer e vc ainda vai ter que esperar mais um ou dois milênios para poder coleta 10% da energia do mundo, vamos concordar que vc passou mil anos faz as coisas devagar mais constantemente e fazendo coisas que vc que fazer (msm que não seja a escolha mais eficiente) seria mais divertido e vc aproveitaria mais,pq aí depois de vc ver que não tem mais nada no mundo aí vc poder taca o foda-se e só coleta energia

HumbleScholarSu:Oh, I should have read the reviews first before reading, I now wasted my 5 hours in this novel. The ignorant and naiveness of the MC is too much, even a simple knowledge that everyone have in his previous world he does not even know it. He does not use much common sense in using the system. He wants to get the below average body of his in the early stages of the story even though this world is a world where strength rules the weak. Instead of getting his previous body he should just create a child instead, it cost cheaper and it can cover up his ignorants and naives, even the strongest cultivators would vomit blood be because the ignorant of the MC is too much. The MC is a bit racist. The story lost its a actual plot of, the MC focus on having a human body instead of getting alot of energy first and start at that time to get a body, he does not even prepare himself for future scenarios. He is not using his system in a proper way, He should buy knowlede about cultivation, the world, and all basic cultures and such at the start but instead actually got the nerve to buy his useless body in the early stages of the story. He is like one of those MCs that treat everything as a joke and he is like a child having a cheat
Heyun
HeyunLv4Heyun

Yeah, I hate how all MCs are braindead for the sake of putting them into trouble, is fine if you want to make your character struggle as an author, just don't make him have the potential to be the top existence from the get go, and have them struggle. If you give the MC the power, then you better have him use it and use it well, and not make him be extremely inefficient on the way he uses his power just to balance him up.-

shillbear
shillbearLv14shillbear

tree of aeon a tree all the way

CriticalReader:The human path is used because author wants to self insert... after reading hundreds of webnovels, published novels and even fanfiction... i no longer hold any expectations
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Ethan_Hall_0254
Ethan_Hall_0254Lv1Ethan_Hall_0254

Don’t worry, it changes. If you read a bit further you’ll see it’s definitely not a regular cultivation novel. He uses his energy aspect to switch human bodies and turn into inanimate objects when his body is to soft. He also isn’t about cultivation, he just starts off in a cultivation world.

batuhan:I think you mentioned a great point. What makes this story special in genre is gone. I was expecting some transhumanism path of cultivation, instead it developed into "just a boy with a cheat" story.
Ethan_Hall_0254
Ethan_Hall_0254Lv1Ethan_Hall_0254

Just read a bit further, the book stops being about cultivation and he starts leaning into the energy side more.

GreatLeecher:Thanks for the review. It made me decide not to start reading it and get frustrated later on.
Ethan_Hall_0254
Ethan_Hall_0254Lv1Ethan_Hall_0254

Don’t worry it’s not balanced. He quickly become super strong and the book or more about what he does when he’s strong.

Heyun:Yeah, I hate how all MCs are braindead for the sake of putting them into trouble, is fine if you want to make your character struggle as an author, just don't make him have the potential to be the top existence from the get go, and have them struggle. If you give the MC the power, then you better have him use it and use it well, and not make him be extremely inefficient on the way he uses his power just to balance him up.-
Ethan_Hall_0254
Ethan_Hall_0254Lv1Ethan_Hall_0254

He treats everything as a joke because he is aware that he could be op but there is no reason to rush because he will like forever.

HumbleScholarSu:Oh, I should have read the reviews first before reading, I now wasted my 5 hours in this novel. The ignorant and naiveness of the MC is too much, even a simple knowledge that everyone have in his previous world he does not even know it. He does not use much common sense in using the system. He wants to get the below average body of his in the early stages of the story even though this world is a world where strength rules the weak. Instead of getting his previous body he should just create a child instead, it cost cheaper and it can cover up his ignorants and naives, even the strongest cultivators would vomit blood be because the ignorant of the MC is too much. The MC is a bit racist. The story lost its a actual plot of, the MC focus on having a human body instead of getting alot of energy first and start at that time to get a body, he does not even prepare himself for future scenarios. He is not using his system in a proper way, He should buy knowlede about cultivation, the world, and all basic cultures and such at the start but instead actually got the nerve to buy his useless body in the early stages of the story. He is like one of those MCs that treat everything as a joke and he is like a child having a cheat
Jake122
Jake122Lv15Jake122

i just dont understand why make a story with this o.p system and make the mc one of the biggest idiots ive ever read. his stupidity is up there with the mobs in other cultivation novels

Daoist_BreakSky
Daoist_BreakSkyLv3Daoist_BreakSky

If you're reading this I suggest you stop because there is too much bad points in the story. • MC is dumb and not your genius or normal mc type, he doesn't try to think for himself but only ask the system to solve every bit of his problems (like literally for everything, I wont lie just read and be disappointed). • MC chooses a very weak body and unsuitable for cultivation and complains every time when other people make breakthroughs, he complains that his body is to weak and its unfair, and says why can't he have that body that can cultivate fast. Furthermore it worsens because of the fact that he can create a super body that is very op. • MC is not insightful, in just a year he could accumulate hundreds of billions of energy to create a super op body for cultivation that can reach godhood fast but instead he says that he should struggle by himself cause it would be no fun and chooses his very weak body, in the end he spent a few years adapting to qi and increasing his realm in qi condensation, which is very dumb. • This is a novel with a very op system but makes the mc dumb and dependent on everything to make the story longer and give the author money. • Truly bad, you can't be expecting from this, now the novel is already declining with only 3 chapters per week because the readers have long abandoned it 1-100 chapters. If you read this, you'll be infuriated by the dumb logic and long wait for the author to release the chapters. • As I see it this novel will get 2 out of 5 from me.

VoteRat
VoteRatLv4VoteRat

I have another bad point, don't be fooled by the big number of chapters, I would say that they are all barely over 1000 words each. It completely ruins your immersion when you have to click the "next chapter" button every couple of minutes. It's accepable, but nothing to be desired.

Daoist_BreakSky:If you're reading this I suggest you stop because there is too much bad points in the story. • MC is dumb and not your genius or normal mc type, he doesn't try to think for himself but only ask the system to solve every bit of his problems (like literally for everything, I wont lie just read and be disappointed). • MC chooses a very weak body and unsuitable for cultivation and complains every time when other people make breakthroughs, he complains that his body is to weak and its unfair, and says why can't he have that body that can cultivate fast. Furthermore it worsens because of the fact that he can create a super body that is very op. • MC is not insightful, in just a year he could accumulate hundreds of billions of energy to create a super op body for cultivation that can reach godhood fast but instead he says that he should struggle by himself cause it would be no fun and chooses his very weak body, in the end he spent a few years adapting to qi and increasing his realm in qi condensation, which is very dumb. • This is a novel with a very op system but makes the mc dumb and dependent on everything to make the story longer and give the author money. • Truly bad, you can't be expecting from this, now the novel is already declining with only 3 chapters per week because the readers have long abandoned it 1-100 chapters. If you read this, you'll be infuriated by the dumb logic and long wait for the author to release the chapters. • As I see it this novel will get 2 out of 5 from me.
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12UndeadBeing

First, that's stupid. Which person that has some average iq would ever want to read a book about "Reincarnated as an energy with a system" just for him to gain a human form? Much less the mc being lazy about getting stronger just because he has a long time to live, just admit the author used bs plot to make his story as uninteresting and as long as possible for the sheer 5 dollars he gets each time some idiot appears to read about a human in a novel about an energy. Nobody in their right mind would look at a book about an animal and hope this animal becomes a human. This is just a trash book with an author who doesn't know that he wrote the wrong title.

Ethan_Hall_0254:He treats everything as a joke because he is aware that he could be op but there is no reason to rush because he will like forever.
Szeth_son_Neturo
Szeth_son_NeturoLv3Szeth_son_Neturo

Correction, it is now at 3 chapters a week because the author reached a suitable stopping point, and stated as much, he is now writing the ending of the story. The Mc does rely too much on the system way to much for the first 300 chapters, afterwards though, he no longer does so, and even forgets he has it at times. You have every right to not like the story, however it seems that you haven’t read much of it to begin with. The author attempted the “world building through the main character’s ignorance” path, and did about as well as the path can do.

Daoist_BreakSky:If you're reading this I suggest you stop because there is too much bad points in the story. • MC is dumb and not your genius or normal mc type, he doesn't try to think for himself but only ask the system to solve every bit of his problems (like literally for everything, I wont lie just read and be disappointed). • MC chooses a very weak body and unsuitable for cultivation and complains every time when other people make breakthroughs, he complains that his body is to weak and its unfair, and says why can't he have that body that can cultivate fast. Furthermore it worsens because of the fact that he can create a super body that is very op. • MC is not insightful, in just a year he could accumulate hundreds of billions of energy to create a super op body for cultivation that can reach godhood fast but instead he says that he should struggle by himself cause it would be no fun and chooses his very weak body, in the end he spent a few years adapting to qi and increasing his realm in qi condensation, which is very dumb. • This is a novel with a very op system but makes the mc dumb and dependent on everything to make the story longer and give the author money. • Truly bad, you can't be expecting from this, now the novel is already declining with only 3 chapters per week because the readers have long abandoned it 1-100 chapters. If you read this, you'll be infuriated by the dumb logic and long wait for the author to release the chapters. • As I see it this novel will get 2 out of 5 from me.
SassyIsland
SassyIslandLv1SassyIsland

Does it involve world hopping? If so the 1100+ chapters might make up for a 100ch arc