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Snoring_Panda
Snoring_PandaAuthor1yrSnoring_Panda

Hello, Author here. This is a story I started on a whim for WPC #192 and somehow won bronze. The first 20 or so chapters are just me searching for directions I should be taking this novel to. So, many ideas that pop up there don't last for long. Especially, the dual personality. However, the world I build up during these times is not random. Also, please do not expect the MC to be a genius or something, and just enjoy what he does.

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Reincarnated as an Energy with a System

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Circlethatone
CirclethatoneLv6Circlethatone

As long as he doesn't ever truly become a human again then you will probably retain a lot of readers 😊♥

Kyorkuna
KyorkunaLv4Kyorkuna

I love this book already author sama i binge read it all in 1 and a hAlf hours i will definantly support for more Chapters

Targaryen99
Targaryen99Lv1Targaryen99

Not a genius is doable, just don't make him dumb.

Llama_Llama7
Llama_Llama7Lv3Llama_Llama7

don't drop this is one of best novels I've read so far i love it

MarkkoYusek
MarkkoYusekLv2MarkkoYusek

there is romance? it will be harem?

Muhammad_Usama1
Muhammad_Usama1Lv3Muhammad_Usama1

i hope there is none. I am alreday tired of good novels ruined due to mcs chasing after skirts.

MarkkoYusek:there is romance? it will be harem?
Chaosdragon
ChaosdragonLv1Chaosdragon

I hope there’s no harem tbh idm one fml in the end but no harem. Could you let us know what your thinking author.

HellsGate
HellsGateLv5HellsGate

Idk he's a sentient energy... thing? being? and will live forever so unless fml can also live forever he's probably gonna have a few flings.

Chaosdragon:I hope there’s no harem tbh idm one fml in the end but no harem. Could you let us know what your thinking author.
Chaosdragon
ChaosdragonLv1Chaosdragon

Your forgetting he has a system with basically all the knowledge in the universe. If he wanted to and found a girl he really liked he could buy her an immortal cultivation manual. It’s not like there are no other immortals in the universe. All he has to do is save points

HellsGate:Idk he's a sentient energy... thing? being? and will live forever so unless fml can also live forever he's probably gonna have a few flings.
Objectively_Wrong
Objectively_WrongLv3Objectively_Wrong

Wait a minute, isn’t this the cover for God of Fishing on Novelupdates?

Bidhan_Achhami
Bidhan_AchhamiLv3Bidhan_Achhami

Whoa dude your from nepal as well!?

Snoring_Panda
Snoring_PandaAuthorSnoring_Panda

Yeah

Bidhan_Achhami:Whoa dude your from nepal as well!?
Daoist_Little_Yun
Daoist_Little_YunLv4Daoist_Little_Yun

Kevin_Middleton
Kevin_MiddletonLv2Kevin_Middleton

Great story so far. When reading I thought that since a lot of items are very expensive, there should be an unlock for a lottery system in the shop. A quest system might be cool too, but I wouldn’t want you to mess with the formula too much since the balance is pretty good right now.

Gamer_Boy_2840
Gamer_Boy_2840Lv4Gamer_Boy_2840

The novel starts promising ..sure some parts are annoying like the price of everything he buys from the system is ridiculously high and is tiered for no reason but at least it's original .then things start going downhill with an mc that has the brain power of a 8 year old and the patience of a 3 yeah old...and now the novel is turning into another cliche with the mc joining some random sect ...such a shame..it has great potential

21man
21manLv421man

does he go back to the village or not

Aaliyah_Stark_
Aaliyah_Stark_Lv3Aaliyah_Stark_

😄

ron345
ron345Lv1ron345

are u nepali?

Snoring_Panda
Snoring_PandaAuthorSnoring_Panda

yes

ron345:are u nepali?
a_commoner
a_commonerLv5a_commoner

Bro, the synopsis is random and boring, try putting some effort there, you're letting a lot of potential readers escape. I don't know if your novel is good or bad, but the synopsis gave me no motivation to try it.