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esohul29
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dear writer I love your way of thinking when you write but there are still a lot of things you need to work on; like the space in between the sentences; I for one like your R18 mindset [img=recommend] I feel that there are some characters which need to be be killed (su); however it's feeling a bit slow in terms of getting too the 2yrs before she 18yrs [img=update] this is my view so far on your book. I hope you continue and give us more [img=update]

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Shrewd wife of Lin brothers

fairytail72

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fairytail72
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Don’t worry I won’t take that long

esohul29
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thank you

fairytail72:Don’t worry I won’t take that long
Rico_Porogoy
Rico_PorogoyLv2Rico_Porogoy

Author, Please do remember your the author, wrote what you see fit in your novel....will I too do hope for more exciting scene 😂. Can't even what when she's 18 gosh.....I was kind of looking for more😁

fairytail72:Don’t worry I won’t take that long