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So I only read 20+ chapters so I cannot say if there will be improvement on this. Anyway the plot is interesting however it is kinda confusing I advise you Author-san to please recheck the names, and grammar before updating because It is a little bit hard for me to understand who is talking. Great work anyway.

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Thanks for Reading and leaving a review. I already planning to edit the first few chapters due to spotted errors. :)