Review Detail of MoonLord in The Ruined Death Knight
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One of the best anti-hero undead webnovel! I especially like how he isn't exactly a mindless murderer towards people he "knows." This gives the story an amazing perspective. I also love how the characters are fleshed out. However, I'm gonna be honest, your writing has gotten wayyyyyy better, like it become amazing, but I believe that your early chapters writing have dissuaded many people who are picky towards grammar to drop it earlier. I really recommend editing the first chapters, even if you edit 1 chapter a week. Though, it's your choice. I just have to say that I love your work.
The Ruined Death Knight
Allenheim
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I hate the background of mc and I hate system and I hate development because it was too fast and he got slaved too for 2 years! when he can just be a low-key or hiding identity but not using identity of runesmith because it was too rare and can attract attention and the rurune he used is black magic that used by undead or other races uses black magic IDK if it's black magic