Review Detail of Michael_Crew in MARTIAL ANCIENT ERA: Strongest Body Ancient Cultivation

hi, I know that I probably should write this in the novel area but I can't help but say that the reason that I quit reading the novel is because there were too many areas that needed to be fixed. there were areas that had words put together where it needed to be spaced also there were some parts that just were inconsistent with what was being said. I think the author should go through their story again and review what needs to be fixed. I believe that this novel has potential but it won't reach that potential if the novel isn't fixed by an editor.