Review Detail of Nakasuka in The Star Sovereign (1st Pov)

This was super interesting to read!!! I liked how the ML traveled through the road of reincarnation and met others as well. That was something completely different from how most reincarnation stories do! Your writing style is amazing, and despite the grammatical errors, this story keeps you wanting more! I also noticed how you change the paragraphs that I commented on, and I thought that was amazing! An author who is willing to listen to what their readers has to say, is an author that will surely get far in life! Just be sure to take account your own feelings as well when taking suggestions! Other than that, KEEP GOING STRONG!