Honestly, I like the story but it is confusing at times regarding places and all. Sometimes the scene switches without the place title appearing. There are too many grammar mistakes like instead of "ideas" in some sentences it is wrote "designs". The biggest of all is the fact that as a vegetarian, I am absolutely disgusted by the dishes mentioned like Pig intestine.
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