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I lasted until the fifth chapter and I thought of just stopping it there but I skipped until chapter 18 to see if it's only in the early chapters but I guess this is not my cup of tea. As I was saying, I only lasted until chapter 5 because aside from the names of the protagonists, it's also because of the pace of the story, it was too fast-paced and completely lacked substance and emotions, it feels like the characters in this story are robots and just doing what's described of them, I just feel like their actions are forced and it's not in any way natural. Like I cringed big time when the ML called the FL little kitten or something(I don't remember anymore lol) after he took her home, and don't even get me started on their first meeting since it gives me the super lecher vibe from the ML after reading their dialogue wherein the FL ran away after she was drugged by her foster father and meeting the ML right away saying the usual lines like(it's not the accurate convo btw, just similar) 'please take me with you' , 'how will you repay me' ,'you can do anything you want as long as you take me away', like seriously, the encounter is too abrupt and doesn't make sense. And also, even before that, where the foster father drugged the FL, like she was a businesswoman in her past life, and she just transmigrated into her current body, and she wholeheartedly trusted the man. like the hell, if I were in her shoes and my foster father offered me tea after I came home apologizing for what his wife and daughter did and saying stuff like 'then drink the tea, take it as if you've accepted my apology', I'll feel sus as hell, especially if her foster father seems eager for her to drink it, it will at least make me wonder what's in the tea.. and the foster father is also a lecher since he even added aphrodisiac to the FL, but the only thing I like is the ml not taking advantage of her and didn't take her in the end. All in all, the plot seems like the common troupe, fast paced, dialogue and actions too abrupt and too forced and doesn't look natural at all. No hate, btw. I just want to share my honest review. In the end, it all depends on your own taste and perspective. 😊😊. .

The Weak and Sickly Young Miss is Spoiled by All

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(when writing my review, I keep feeling like I'm missing something. it turned out that I forgot a word I'm trying to remember and I remembered it now. .) I forgot to add something that's been evading me when I was writing my review, which is: the flow of the story is not good and as I was saying in my review, is not natural and kind of abrupt.. thats all, lol