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Review Detail of DarkSlayer in HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

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DarkSlayer
DarkSlayerLv142yrDarkSlayer

Writing Quality: Excellent! There's barely an errors. Every paragraph explained very clearly and can easily understand. Story Development: The Best! At the first chapter, I already hooked and thirst for more. Every part were explained why and what happened to make my curiosity intensifies! Character Design: Christopher Maxwell, our dear MC of this story. A reincarnated dude who's enter wizardly world of Harry Potter, and make the Protagonist of this world as his Lackey since Harry is too ignorant and naive reconsider his age. Christopher a character that sometimes give you Aizen vibes since he's kinda cunning and little bit of sadist and also has good sense of humor especially when he's included some famous Memes. The young master part were my favorite though, while Super Saiyan is the second. Why? I like the humor more than power up part. Aside from Chris, other characters also has their personalities, an interesting some, when interacting with Chris since he's planned to corrupt them with his pranks and humor. Well, there's a lot about this to explain, so I shall End it here. Updating Stability: Not much to say... It's great, it put smile on my face. World Background: Mostly center around Hogwarts. I don't care much about it as long I know where.

HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

Snollygoster

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_asdfghjkl2021
_asdfghjkl2021Lv5_asdfghjkl2021

you're the dumbass who do not even know the definition of "barely". Let me explain it to you, you low-IQ'd creep, you only say barely if throughout the story there's only a few mistakes (either grammatical, punctuations, vocabulary, or spelling). BUT NOOOOOO, every chapter is a combination of all these errors, and it's so pervasive, that it persist throughout the story. So, I'm not really sure what you're yapping about when you get called out for your disingenuous review/comment, you waste of genetic material.

DarkSlayer:You're either blind or stupid. I said "there's 𝐛𝐚𝐫𝐞𝐥𝐲 any errors" instead of "there're no errors" because any errors existed did not ruining the reading experiences. I have seen some errors, but it's easy enough to ignored most of them. You just have some skills issues in reading. Yes, you're the problem here.
Snollygoster
SnollygosterAuthorSnollygoster

thanks for the review!!!

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

Author, what is mc's goals? Personally, I enjoy ambitious mc's who want to achieve their desires e.g become powerful/rich etc etc.

Snollygoster:thanks for the review!!!
Snollygoster
SnollygosterAuthorSnollygoster

In chapter 88, someone asked him why he wasn't interested in politics. His answer was—"Why be a king? When you could be a god?"

Uncle_Sheogorath:Author, what is mc's goals? Personally, I enjoy ambitious mc's who want to achieve their desires e.g become powerful/rich etc etc.
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

Well to be a god or something like that requires resources and power and becoming a king before a god is clearly the right path from which higher power could come.

Snollygoster:In chapter 88, someone asked him why he wasn't interested in politics. His answer was—"Why be a king? When you could be a god?"
Demelios
DemeliosLv14Demelios

Barely an error. .. Are you blind? There is an error per paragraph at the very least!

Cpecific
CpecificLv10Cpecific

dude, it was clearly a reference to Eminem

Uncle_Sheogorath:Well to be a god or something like that requires resources and power and becoming a king before a god is clearly the right path from which higher power could come.
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

I don't listen to rap.

Cpecific:dude, it was clearly a reference to Eminem
Truck_Samaa
Truck_SamaaLv14Truck_Samaa

So my brother, time for the $ 1 million question. Is it harem?

DarkSlayer
DarkSlayerLv14DarkSlayer

Truck_Samaa:So my brother, time for the $ 1 million question. Is it harem?
Truck_Samaa
Truck_SamaaLv14Truck_Samaa

so who's the lucky one

DarkSlayer:
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DarkSlayer
DarkSlayerLv14DarkSlayer

It's Dora of course!

Truck_Samaa:so who's the lucky one
_asdfghjkl2021
_asdfghjkl2021Lv5_asdfghjkl2021

"there's barely any errors"

DarkSlayer
DarkSlayerLv14DarkSlayer

You're either blind or stupid. I said "there's 𝐛𝐚𝐫𝐞𝐥𝐲 any errors" instead of "there're no errors" because any errors existed did not ruining the reading experiences. I have seen some errors, but it's easy enough to ignored most of them. You just have some skills issues in reading. Yes, you're the problem here.

_asdfghjkl2021:"there's barely any errors"
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