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Review Detail of JesReadin in The Deity's curse

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This was an interesting story that covered centuries of events that shaped the lives of the main protagonists, Kaito and Noah. With powerful beings and deities, magical creatures and demons, mysteries of the past and their influence on the present day, it was an ambitious undertaking by the author. And for all I enjoyed it, for me it seemed that the author let the story evolve in directions that didn’t allow for everything to make sense or be resolved. Things that seemed important inthe beginning like the curse uttered by a dying Kaito in one life seeming to have such dark consequences for Noah but that never really got addressed. In fact, the author made the reason for Noah’s presence seem to be of his own need for penance, but it was insanely extreme and often abusive and lasted so long that, that reason made no sense. And abusive grandpa never faced a consequence.. that really irked me. Then there was so much time spent on others relationships, and so much time apart for the MCs and over all those centuries we just got a couple of gentle encouragement kisses in a fight scene. Hmm now I start listing it, there was quite a bit of disappointment lol. But I did like it, I just think it could have been shorter and more cohesive. And if this was a love that defied the ages, could they be on the same page about it for more than 2 chapters? Seriously 😅 Oh and a fair amount of distracting typos, pronoun errors, verb errors, name mix ups.

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