Review Detail of B0ssu in Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)

The fact that the author has a better grasp of English than 99% of the people who post on this site is the only good thing I can say about this story. The MC is little more than a plot device, veering between competence and idiocy as needed to suit the plot. The fusion of the HP world and the MCU world is an interesting concept, but has been handled lazily and shows that not enough thought was put into worldbuilding. All this is symptomatic of the worst and fatal flaw of this story, that the author is unwilling or unable to deviate from the stations in canon. Starting the story in the 30s, well in advance of the main plotline of both franchises, should have given plenty of opportunities to cause meaningful changes. However, the author has gone out of his way to make his MC an over-confident and moronic imbecile whenever necessary, to make sure that all the major stations of canon will still happen. And what little original content there has been is so flat that it's not worth the constant Idiot Balls to make this story a glorified canon rehash. Basically, save yourselves the time. Just re-watch the HP movies, the MCU movies, and the X-Men movies and you'll get a more competently executed and enjoyable version of this story.