Review Detail of MarcGem in MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
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The writing quality of this book frightens me. I know English isn't the author's first language, but it's as bad as google translate for the 33 chapters that I've read. This book seriously needs an editor. Any editor that's well-versed in English and above the mental age of 14 will change this book for the better... or at least make it less excruciating to read. The story is quite a cliche, but I like the genre. I've only read a bit, so I can't say much, but it's pretty generic and monotone for a start. I can't see much character design. MC's backstory is very overused, and side characters only stay to the side. World background is at least interesting. It's always the world background bringing up the entire genre. Likewise, I only read this novel to immerse myself in the genre. And I only write reviews when novels are either extremely good or downright bad. I hope the author makes the plot exciting and hires an editor so I can continue to read and give it a chance once more. I'm forced to stop reading at 33 chapters in.
MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
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As someone who has gotten to about chapter 170 or so, the writing does improve shortly into the premium chapters - the first 30 to 40 chapters are rather rough however so if you've got the time and passes try to get about 9 chapters into premium (use your passes!) and see if you like what you see. There are parts of this novel that drive me nuts (some of the misuse of gaming terms as well as the Indian numbering system which I swear when the author converts it to spelled out numbers it changes by a factor of 10 half the time, basically its very jarring to read as it just seems like a writing mistake to someone used to western numbering) but overall the plot is decent, and its an overall enjoyable read - though this definitely is more of a novel to use your passes on imo.
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