I've read all 40 chapters. The concept, the story, the background, everything is the one that i like and love. I am hooked up with your novel. Just one request, do the editing. for example "noone" i had to google it for the meaning (half kidding). It is "none" not "noone". It was little bit annoying, to tell you the truth. Even though, I've given you 5 star because 90% of it was acceptable. Please do continue the story. JAI BAJARANGBALI!!!!!!!
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LIKEBrother English is not my first language , i am from Gujrat , i will hire a proofreader later to deal with these minor issues ..... i thoroughly appreciate your feedback and will surely work to remedy these mistakes to provide you readers with a better reading experience . Thanx a lot for the 5 stars . Jai Bajrangbali ! 🙏🏼