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What is Dark World? I was looking for materials but I saw this and intrigued but it failed me. The writing was not good so it didn't help with my style and the plot is confusing and short. I don't know what to say, this might help you author-san. Read more a lot of novels and materials to improve. It is applied for everyone, as famous writers have their own pace too, they read for materials.
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Oh . Sorry For that . New to writing . And writing as I have a lot of free time these few days . As for the Dark World , It's like a second planet . It will be more explained as he gain back his memories . But Basically , It's a new planet that appeared out of nowhere and is an apocalyptic world where humanity has gone extinct but was peak before . Again, Sorry for bad writing . It might improve with time as I am new .
For_Writing:Oh . Sorry For that . New to writing . And writing as I have a lot of free time these few days . As for the Dark World , It's like a second planet . It will be more explained as he gain back his memories . But Basically , It's a new planet that appeared out of nowhere and is an apocalyptic world where humanity has gone extinct but was peak before . Again, Sorry for bad writing . It might improve with time as I am new .