Review Detail of TheRabbitHole in I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.

On the surface, it's just a story about two idiots, but really it's about two broken teens. It's a really great work for the author to be able to write something like that. Yes, there are occasional moments of silliness but it doesn't take away from the story, and in fact, adds to it. The writing style is good, a little improvement would be nice, but the story is still nice as it is, it doesn't particularly hinder the enjoyment you can get out of it. If the author keeps it up, I might become an avid reader! o(*￣▽￣*)ブ