Review Detail of AngryBolt in Felicia Hardy MCU

the author writes in a hurry, the text sometimes seems to have nothing in common with each other, as if a bunch of mini stories in one. I don't understand why he changed gender? could you just write about the girl?? In general, you can read, but the story is purely for a non-whimsical reader. P.s. It's just my opinion, it's up to you to read it or not.