Review Detail of RoughOnyon in BNHA/MHA: The Dark Hero

I don't think I've encountered a good Akutagawa fanfic before, or it might be the first even, loving the story and characters, there are some writing mistakes but it's not that much that it became noticeable , also I'm not really seeing the sickness too much, maybe because he doesn't use his ability like canon Akutagawa but it's still good.