Review Detail of King_Rycon in An Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint

Hey, thanks for the review. I saw your comments, and I will admit, when I first began this story, I did rush into it and not give it proper, gradual development at first. I skipped around because I wanted to rush into the action, and as the saying goes, "Only fools rush in." Anyways, thanks for giving it a read, and I hope any novel I make in the future impresses you then!