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Review Detail of KinghtariusWR in In Marvel as Superman

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KinghtariusWR
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too much... i mean too much... monologue about this and that which has no essentials to the proggress of the story or the plot. the story become so slow with too many chapter wasted for BS monologue. it supposed to be action novel coz it take on MCU but become monologue drama novel with less action as complimentary plot. reader wanna see the story progress more than just reading whats inside superman head.need more detail about mc, char in novel and world background but author put more how much mc think of something and how smart he is explaining something to his self not to others around him or to reader.it's getting boring to read it after chapter 30s... i think 5 more chapter if it's still like this, i will drop the novel.btw the idea of the novel is great but the way deliver it nees more improvement

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