Review Detail of Gnaipafe in The Alpha VS The Beta

Item: The Alpha VS The Beta
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

GnaipafeLv22yrGnaipafe

The premises of the story is great, as well as the plot and character development. There's more room for development in terms of writing and grammar. But it didn't hinder me from reading more. it is still very interesting and I'll say a great story entirely.

The Alpha VS The Beta

Vienna_Gu

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Vienna_GuAuthorVienna_Gu

thank you for good review and your suggestion, i will try to development my writing, world building and grammar as your expectation :)

2yr

Vienna_GuAuthorVienna_Gu

have you added the story to your library?

2yr

GnaipafeLv2Gnaipafe

yeah it is on my reading list.

Vienna_Gu:have you added the story to your library?

2yr

Vienna_GuAuthorVienna_Gu

alright, big thanks to you

2yr