The beginning was heart breaking. It was a wholesome story and I felt each needed emotion in each scene. As this story goes on, it could be a tv series in the future. Grammar and narration was a check with a roller coaster ride of emotions. Nice! good job![img=recommend]
Mao_Yuxuan
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LIKEI am both updating My System And I which is a comedy and Amnesia Of Genius Copycat which is a zombie at the same time of day. The next day will be on my Dark fantasy one called Grandmaster Of All Job Class. So no one's stopping their updates. I managed to handle three novels at the same now as I have matured as a writer. So no worries [img=recommend], anyways, what novel are you referring to? I am curious what novel it is.
Alingra_Maitland:I really wish you would update, this is a good story with a lot of potential
Mel_Aniv:I am both updating My System And I which is a comedy and Amnesia Of Genius Copycat which is a zombie at the same time of day. The next day will be on my Dark fantasy one called Grandmaster Of All Job Class. So no one's stopping their updates. I managed to handle three novels at the same now as I have matured as a writer. So no worries [img=recommend], anyways, what novel are you referring to? I am curious what novel it is.
I will update. Fufu~ please wait for some time as I'm working on an update this month. I wish I could đ¤§
Alingra_Maitland:I really wish you would update, this is a good story with a lot of potential
Mao_Yuxuan:I will update. Fufu~ please wait for some time as I'm working on an update this month. I wish I could đ¤§