Review Detail of Fiston_Niyomugabo_4470 in Mortal becomes a deity Fanfic.

I like the story and his progress but if you want a suggestion make him see how cold he has gotten to his family and have him reflect and become better cause let’s be honest in this story other then Poseidon nobody has done something really wrong and maybe have him repair his relationship with his mother and not be so cold when talking to his father.