The plot is good and there aren't that many mistakes and the few mistakes are barely noticeable such as grammar mistakes and it's good since it's readable. the only problem was some filler sentences that could be removed and weren't needed in the novel. other than that, there doesn't seem to be any more mistakes, and if there are, please tell me. I enjoyed reading it.
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