Review Detail of HugoStlebch in Dungeon of Niflheim

I've read up to chapter 125 so I'll be honest in my opinion. I really like your idea for your story, but as well as having good successes, there are also mistakes. Mainly in grammar and continuity Example: in one chapter there was a character who clicked his tongue 5 times and the sighs: (Haaaaaa) seem like screams. It is very obvious that the author knows many Japanese, Korean and Chinese novels and brought some of his strengths to the novel, but he also brought his weaknesses like the personality of his protagonist.