Review Detail of Venalter in Reincarnated in an Otome game as a background character

Some problems in here 1. Grammar ( the subject like he, she, him, her) 2. Time Skip ( so fast, but the mc power progress not ) 3. Change POV too much 4. Good foreshadow ( or stupid cliffhanger?) The one that speak on opening ceremony, who knows so suddenly MC got Angry and didnt show up on next few chapter 5. Stupid Power rank MC can smash new A Rank but cant beat Queen Spider? the one that he fought at 7 years old, and how old he is when she saved Lily? The way he wasting his time without power up with the so called future Right Hand of Demon King and his Memories, well yeah AMAZING Well author admit too that he want irritate us with his MC and congrats you got it.