I liked the plot very much, but reading it is tough since I guess this is your first novel and you're a novice in writing. There are many grammatical errors and the structures of your sentences are lacking too. It's like you have it in you mind and can't write it properly to express it. Keep writing though, practice makes perfect đ
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