Review Detail of jinho_gang in I tried to kill a computer mouse

Its ok for me i like the plot i read your novel because of the title then i saw the synopsis so yeah i gave it a chance and i like it but I can say that your a novice writer is it your first time i guess but its nice its pretty long but i think the lower part should be on the second chapter so that you can have more chapter cuz its already pretty long plus you have a tag of reincarnation on first so put the lower part in the second dont add more there