Review Detail of ShadyDemoness in Star Wars: Skywalker

So, overall good for a fanfiction, but it stays just that. Writing quality was sometimes good, but more often than not filled with grammar and spelling mistakes. Story development was often expected, as it is a mary sue power fantasy. I liked how the author pulled things from star wars lore and legends. Character design was meh overall. Typical harem were female characters besides his mom all love him. The force is used as a crutch for that. Enemies became stupid in the face of our overly intelligent mc, even palps became not really an enemy facing an !c that knew all his plans all along. Updating stability was top. Nothing more has to be said about that. World background is a big minus. The reason being that this is a fanfiction and no world background was made by the author himself. If there was a choice for 0 stars - not applicable, i would take that. Additionally backgrounds from characters and other things are repeated often and without shortening it. Which would make sense if the novel didn't update dayly, but it does. So it only make it seem like the author thinks readers are stupid. World backgrounds besides characters seem like copy pasted from wookiepedia. Overall good for short bursts of reading when you want a feel good power fantasy. But prolonged reading leads to an aneurysm and boredom.