Review Detail of David_Sooman in Star Wars: Skywalker

Good fan fic but multiple problems that has made me consider reading more. I have read till chapter 80 and while good it has a few issues I will lay out. 1. As mentioned in other comments the info dumping puts Chinese cultivation novels to shame. So many paragraphs of information that can be summarized in a few sentences. We all have seen Star Wars if you are reading this so it’ pointless. 2. The pacing is weird since there is so much info then the actual interactions he has are minimal. I don’t want to read the Star Wars wiki I want to read about a non cannon story. 3. The mc is kind of dull and unlikeable. Like he is just there and does some stuff but his weird inner monologues make it seem like your reading a bibliography rather than a story Overall decent but it’s boring and to much information bogs it down