Review Detail of AvaCeciliaGrace in Star Wars: Skywalker

I always enjoy a good star wars fanfic and have binge read up to chapter 120 so far and I gotta say author you need to stop over explaining everything/info dumping for word count. 120 chapters and its still going on. literally in the chapter I just read you wrote "interrogation, the action of interrogating, or the process of being interrogated". like come on man...info dumps l, redundant sentences, and definitions of things we already know just are super uncessary this far into a fanfic