Review Detail of Clockwork_Jester in Star Wars: Skywalker
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The writing and grammar are good overall, and the MC is fairly well done. However, the story progression is a bit of a slog, especially since the author mostly just copy-pastes scenes from the movies blow for blow. Also, the author's portrayal of Grievous honestly doesn't make sense for the character, and was more than a little off-putting for me. Overall, not a terrible story, but I've seen better.
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Makes sense for me. If you notice, those who interact with the mc are influenced by him subconsciously. It reminds me of KOTOR 2 where the mc influences his comrades unconsciously through the force, aligning to his ideals. He brings balance. The dark around him becomes brighter and the light becomes darker.