Review Detail of _San_ in Eternal Thief

wn review: writing quality: sometimes author makes mistakes in spelling words, or use a words with different meaning (definitely vs indefinitely) story development: its pretty ok character design: hmm ok mc is the only good guys, his girl friends are all good, and everyone else is bad guy so we need to rob them world background: pretty solid though just the people personalities makes it a little bad. my review: boy got system cuz his little friend- sister was dying, he is getting missions to rob from system, got skills from that and tahts pretty much it