Not bad story and idea, but the writing quality is awful, killing all the fun. I wish this book can get complete makeover since the person who wrote it doesnt know how to use english at all
Wahi
Liked it!
I'm open if anyone wants to lend a hand (:
I mean I hear people talk about how grammerly is good
Wahi:I'm open if anyone wants to lend a hand (:
use grammarly paid version, or hire proof reader