Review Detail of sage10001 in Eternal Thief

1st mission: “Penalty for failure: Death” The story is great but the author really has no idea how to create tension. Every single character will be railroaded into a forced path and there will be no decission making, you will always know what will happen next. However it is at least an decently interesting path. Great story and concept. But the author just never leaves any possibility for alternate paths or ”what if” questions. Anything important was always going to happen the exact way it happened because the author only left one path for the story to continue.